I am proud of the piece I recently posted in the group here called "aging well". A piece I called ‘thinking about death "

@jdiakiw Hi Jerry, I was a language arts/writing teacher of kids who did not know English for 35 years. Long story short, I was taught never to mark up a paper with red ink, red being an alarming, critical color. Also, I was taught to only pick 1 thing on a paper for a student to improve, and concentrate changing only that. So I would use a lavendar ink, and let's say, just put in periods where my student forgot to use them. Concentrate on improving 1 thing at a time!!!!!! This method worked!!!!!! Lori Renee